Sea Of Discontent~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Sea Of Discontent~

Rating: 5.0


It was an envious night
All tattered in green
The two-eyed monster - disturbed
Feeling it's ragefull & mean;
It was a no happy ever afters - night
Split and bent - out of place
A general electric - radio waves -kind of night
All sewn up in the viscous toxin's lace;
It was a dare you to even try it 'manually' kind of night
Where the moon & stars lit up the darkened sky
It was guided by: SOS - this hapless mess
The sailor's lost on the sea - longing to fly ever high;
It was an abyss kind of stormy night - indeed
The utter tragic of the deeps darkest infinity
It was the green - eyed monster kind of night
An unholy tempest tossed in the gravest of envy;

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
By, Theodora Onken

May 21,2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Glad you liked this David. This really wasn't about stormy weather though!

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Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Thank you David. Glad you liked this; actually this really wasn't a write about the weather but more the the mood of this time;

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David Wood 23 May 2013

We don't seem to get really stormy weather these days. At least here in Swansea. Perhaps its climate change. Lovely poem. Have you read any of my sonnets yet?

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Theodora Onken 21 May 2013

Gajanan, Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

very good one, powerful. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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