Sea Poem by Joan Metelerkamp

Sea

Rating: 5.0


To have lost even the why or the what for -
to dream and to wake with the weight
of even the mechanical why even the mechanical wherefore -

the primitive one-string cello,
bent low playing a threnody, thread, theme I know,
into the night as I wake heaving it, hearing it -

like a chorus dissolving
not only sadness, sea,
but past sadness
past past sadness

now that I live so close to your sound, sea,
even at night wake to listen for you -
close to your smell
close and often to your salvage
your changing sand and rock shelf, sea,
lost generations
lost progenitors
past sadness, sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

like a chorus dissolving not only sadness, sea, but past sadness past past sadness your changing sand and rock shelf, sea, lost generations A lovely mastered art by the poetess, done so elegantly, soaked with carefully chosen imageries and charming metaphors..forces any reader to regard you as a poet of distinction. Thanks dear poetess for the nicely crafted poem. 10+++ for it. Regards. Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary. It is a beautiful metaphorical poem with stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Bill Cantrell 21 August 2017

A wonderful poem, the enchantment, the sea is sweeping clean her dunes and polishing her corals and she knows very well how to affect our emotions! I really love the sea...ocean, and I loved reading your poem.

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