Scared Poem by Sylvia Dise

Scared



When I say no
It doesn't mean let's go
Hands getting stronger
I can't take this any longer
Yell, Scream, and Kick
It doesn't do anything but make him hit
Wishing it was over
No, he wasn't sober
I didn't see this coming
There's no time for humming
Trust is an issue
I can't kiss you
Looking in his face
Was a big disgrace
This is mean and degrading
This world is fading
I'm running from fear
That's all that I hear
Me feeling like this is hard to miss
I want the feeling of bliss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 27 May 2009

realistic approach and let me say well done.....10/10.... and i wish to say more.as..hope you go through my poems and they may touch your heart too and be in touch.. we learn from each other... as I have mentioned that I am poet with 6 books published and know litle bit as peace wisher poet becuse peace is my dream and my most of peotic thoughts are sorrouded by it... I may send you E copies of book if you like to read or keep in your record... recently an other book is going to publsih in Canada by my poetry friends which is based on the critques... it will titled THE PEACE WISHER... all about my work..hope your comments will be added to it if you do litle in detailed way...or you can do a one pag note as a over all views about my peac willing thoughts.... if you know more about me..just search my name in net, you wil find many international sites covering my poetry and thoughts... and in last let me share one of my famous say with you.... ((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with... afzal shauq)) hope I get comments from your side, ...sure I will be doing to your poems too.... my best poetry friend... your's afzal shauq +92 346 5455414 and +92 300 520 60 95

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Sylvia Dise

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Laurel, Delaware
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