Sandcastles Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Sandcastles

Rating: 5.0


A grand castle built on sand
Has no chance of standing
The test of time
Wave after wave
Leave nothing but ruins

Tuesday, June 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 June 2019

PEOPLE BUILD CASTLES IN THE AIR AND MAKE ALL REALISE CASTLES CAN BE BUILT BUT FOR A FEW IMAGINARY MOMENTS ERE THE FALL JB

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Julia Luber 25 June 2019

succinct reflection upon how a castle is not even strong enough in face of the waves of the beach it stands on- I guess why more castles were not built on the beach, and why they're built up on mountains

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2019

The test of time/Wave after wave/Leave nothing but ruins……..Enough substance is there to ponder. A wonderful poem! Short but immensely eloquent.......................................10

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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