Sand Poem by Tim Underwood

Sand

Rating: 5.0


Caress me, for I crave softness against by flesh
Warm me with your subtle touch.
Excite me with a wind swept dance.
Arouse me with your passive form.
Shield me from the final storm.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The inspiration for this poem was a trip to Morocco and the seen from The English Patient. The scene being the leading lady's naked back brilliantly compared to the Sahara Desert.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 April 2012

Short but powerful write that is well penned and rich in imagery! Very romantic and touching! Bravo! Tim! Your poetic talent is clearly filtering through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! You are heading the right direction in the Poetry World! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Martin O'Neill 03 April 2012

I love the imagery here. Should the last line be 'Shield me from the final storm? '

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