Hit It! Poem by Tim Underwood

Hit It!

Rating: 5.0


Hit it Again!
Hit it, I stand!
I'm sure I'll win this hand.
'Hey Slick, What's the trick',
It's double or nothing again.
The game is up. You're out of luck.
The cleaning crew is near!
So put on your shirt, grab a mop,
and start your day off here..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin O'Neill 03 April 2012

i like this vignette of the gambling man, the intimacy of the moment. Minor typo - your should be you're on line 6.

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