tumhara yun pal bhar me badal jana
aaj yaad karke kal bhul jana
dekh ke mujhe yun andekha kr jana
raas nahi aata ab tera mujhse yun rooth jana..
aayenge kai musafir tumhari baahon me
par humsa na hoga koi humdard tumhari raahon me
gaye tum chhord ke mujhe us mod pe
ummid ki koi kiran najar nhi aati kisi ore se..
mat aao ab khawabon me tum
ki nindon se bagawat kr li hai maine
teri yaadon ki tijori se
jeene ki kuchh ummid chura li hai maine..
tujhe pane ki hasrat nhi rahi ab
bas tujhme khona hai mujhe
tere saath gujre yaadon ke sagar me
lahron ki tarah bahna hai mujhe...
a lovely romantic poem written in the classical Indian rather eastern form fluid and charming liked
Hi Kavita, Beautifully rendered, the deep feelings of love and loss. When the lover has left her life, she is resigned to her fate: mat aao ab khawabon me tum ki nindon se bagawat kr li hai maine But she has regained confidence: teri yaadon ki tijori se jeene ki kuchh ummid chura li hai maine.. And, tujhe pane ki hasrat nhi rahi ab bas tujhme khona hai mujhe tere saath gujre yaadon ke sagar me lahron ki tarah bahna hai mujhe... Deeply touching one's heart. Perfect 10+++
Faraz ne khoob kaha tha. Yun hi mosam ki ada dekh ke yaad aaya hai, kis qadar jald badal jate hain insan jana. Thanks.
badalna to dastur hai....kavi duniya badali hai kavi log.thankx sir