Sadness Poem by Jamie Parker

Sadness

Rating: 1.8


Left alone in the cold to die
All around on me, people spy
I scratch for the food I eat
And drink water that's lame
Oh and how all the uver people have so much fame!
when I have none
All I have is the cloths I lie in
My home is not grand...it's a bin
All on my own
Frozen to death
I close my eyes...and take my last breath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean De Montfort 15 October 2005

once again good content very good.Poor spelling and poor structure and would be better if rhymed

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Jamie Parker 09 March 2005

Thanks everyone for rating it ten. It's the only one that is! (: Jamie

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