Why do we go to school?
We have to learn
We have to strive harder
We have to go to school
...
The waves are twisting and turning
Churning and werling
The little boat sways from side to side
And all the fish, have gone to hide
...
Whizzing and banging
The Fire Roars
All the people come out...of there little doors
They watch the fountains much ablaze
...
Left alone in the cold to die
All around on me, people spy
I scratch for the food I eat
And drink water that's lame
...
I put the cup to my lips
and drank the sweet wine in one go
suddenly, as though all the strengh had gone from me
I fell from my chair and I felt my eye-lids drop
...
Oh, there are so many people in this world!
Some are fat some are thin!
Some are white some are black
And someone once told me there are about 32 Million of them!
...
Well, when I was young, I took a likeing to poetry. And a few years after I had been at High Halden, my parents sent me to this school. Brambletye. Then... one day, I heard my freind Magnus whispering about something, like this 'yeah... yeah that was funny! ... hm...POEMHUNTER' and that caught me! So that night, I asked him about it. And he told me, and helped me set up my own account! Now I just blurgh up all the poems that come to me. I once wrote a very good one in English! And was going to put it on poemhunter, but I lost it! And now I have a NEW freind over poemhunter! Jerry. So... If you read this... please send a message and tell me what you think! Thanks! Jamie)
School
Why do we go to school?
We have to learn
We have to strive harder
We have to go to school
School can be fun...
For some people!
I find it fun
I find it bad
I know a guy who was whipped at his school...
That was my dad!) :
So be lucky with have fair schools now
And not green liver for lunch
Like my mum had!) :
Honestly!
Be cool and calm
Or you'll find yourself...
In the headmasters palm...
Hey All! If somethings wrong in my poems please tell me! Also...could someone please tell me how that when you click on a guys name...a load of comments appear at the top! How do you do that? Please tell me! Jamie Parker P.S I'd like to thank Theodora Onken for giving me tips and comments and reading my poems! Thanks Theodora! Jamie
I like very much your poem The Stormy Sea, it remenbers to me the sea of my island Ponza (Italy) so I've translated it into Italian: Mare in tempesta Si contorcono vorticose le onde, ribollenti e stanche. In preda al rollio è la barchetta a dritta e a manca. Fuggono nelle tane i pesci; sulla riva retrostante il fulmine si schianta. Il tempo, quando sarà di nuovo gentile? ...
The Wolf Mansion is actually a story. I just couldn't find any where else to show people! I hope U all enjoy it! Jamie P.S I'm 10 not 11
Good effort but not good enough