Sacred Soul Poem by ramesh rai

Sacred Soul

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Let me get awaken
from deepest slumber
when I'm strolling
with open eyes
but my soul is dormant
unable to access
language of soul.

When my soul is fabricated
with melancholic dress
the pungent smokes are over ride
with callousness and darkness
then you come and bless me
to let me see the world with closed eyes
the stupidity and narrowness of life
and have made it worst than hell.

I wish to see with my closed eyes
cascading flow of pains and sorrows
so as to purify with my sacred soul
to bring joys and happiness
for universal life.

Friday, August 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: happy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 22 August 2015

Awakening from deepest slumber speaks truth about reality of life. Soul is sacred. With closed eyes we can feel this amazingly. Really interesting sharing....10

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Ramesh T A 22 August 2015

Self purification may lead one to a better state of life!

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M Asim Nehal 22 August 2015

Crafty poem...liked it

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 August 2015

Sir'; i I feel that our soul is like lotus and it remains perfectly clean even after being immersed in the mud of worldly life. Similarly joy or sorrow can not affect it. It is our intellect n thinking power as human being that is affected. Human becomes stoic after realizing these things.Thank you for your warm responses to my poems. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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