Room # 69 Poem by Jordan Legaspi

Room # 69

Rating: 4.5


I was so pleased the first time I saw you
I can’t understand myself I keep thinking about you.
I’m so overwhelm with your simplicity and that
caring attitude you’ve shown to me

Whenever I go you always appear in my imagination,
When I’m sleeping you’re always in my dreams
And when I am awake you’re still in my mind
And so I am now asking

What happen that night on that room?

I’m so content whenever you are around
And sometimes without your knowing,
I secretly take a closer look at you,
For I like the way you are
and of course your sweet smile.

Maybe you just don’t know
That sometimes I want to show, but
I’m secretly in love with you
After that night in room sixty-nine

And I wonder if you’re still there after all these years
Room sixty-nine the past time of lovemaking


Note:
(Davao City, Phil.2000)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wesley Cooper 28 May 2008

thats real good! thats one of my faves...

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Brandon Dugan 28 May 2008

that my good sir is an outstanding poem!

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Jordan Legaspi

Jordan Legaspi

Davao City, Philippines
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