Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 211 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Room 306. sunrise of salvation. Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)


I was in the room 306
Where the happiness and humanity were mixed

I was there to protect my project,
A project for humanity and all the sects

It was my first huge step towards the great goals of the world,
I believe the world can be survived by the poetry and the true words

I believe we can let the talent people to grow,
By helping them to blow and not stow

The great people who were at that room,
They were the lover of humanity and its glume

They were especial and kind,
Doctors with fresh and noble minds.

If you do your work for the goals of peace,
Then don't worry about any miss,

Because you will be faced with no loss,
Your path is soft and smooth just as the lovely floss

While the purpose is humanity,
All the other tiny sins look like a mere vanity

The truth is as beautiful as a fife,
It gives meaning to the world and this life

While the world without humanity is like a brine,
While there will be no hopes and its signs.

While people breathe humanity to be alive,
If we forget it, our breath starts to strive

And I am sure that God will help the people who are trying for that goal,
God will help them all, he will refine their soul.

And in the room 306,
I did my first humanity flips

I found people in that room that were the protectors of mankind and humanity,
The noble, especial people full of pure amity.

Here, I give my deep thanks to those pure humans of the room 306
The firs people who listened to me, people who can prevent the humanity of the eclipse

Submitted: Friday, September 6, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 6, 2013

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dedicated to the Doctors of the room number 306.
with best wishes.

Comments about this poem (Room 306. sunrise of salvation. by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (9/13/2013 7:57:00 AM)

    reading it again
    i think in this line
    The great people who were......
    at the end you mean GLUM. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (9/13/2013 7:53:00 AM)

    the peom really goes with nice flowing.i like it.
    the title is a little bit peculiar to me.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (9/10/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    Great poetry, again from an emerging talent_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/8/2013 2:44:00 PM)

    nice my frnd! nice! .....im sure there are many people in PH who are truely glad to meet u by ur great poems...they are proud of ur works :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/6/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    a great poem; we can't do it alone but if a consenus forms then there is strength in many. (Report) Reply

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