River by Deepti Agarwal

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River

Glaciers melts
resulting rivers..
river flows
with all its glow..
crosses the hills
never being still..
reaches the plains
seems ready to slain..
mingles with the sea
its now, all free..! !

~~07/05/08~~

Deepti Agarwal

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Vidi Writes (5/7/2008 9:46:00 AM)
Dear poet,
I relate this River to my life...

Where i m born
How i lived
Which's my path
How much high, how much low i travelled
Whats my aim
Where is my achievement
And finally where will i end? ?

This poem brought me on my kneel
To introspect.

Nice one. Thank you.

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/7/2008 6:58:00 AM)
river can be friendly and could be enemy............hen they 'd become out of control. a good lesson for all.keep up deepti.

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