This ring;
two circles intertwined;
a symbol
of our everlasting friendship
Joy…
At the jokes we share; no one else can understand.
Cheering messages, as we know
when one of us feels low…
Love…
Those special silent moments; no need for spoken words.
Hug that soothes and heals,
knowing how the other feels…
Very moving and deceptively simple looking - the sign of skill. Great work. jim
Sentiments well-described Jane in this piece. write more. Regards.
Hi Jane, Such a touchy moment and how nicely u managed to convey ur feeling to readers! Words in the lexicon r not sufficient to congratulate ur style! In the Vastness of space and immensity of time ur words will survive for ever! U have immense latent tallent, express out, write more for us! Ratneswar Brahmachari ratneswarbrahmachari@yahoo.com
Wonderful sentiment here Jane, you have conveyed the unity that two people can share through both heart and mind. Kind regards, Justine.
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I would like to translate this poem
Lovely sentiments, Jane. Unspoken 'words' are often the most heartfelt. Two people completely in synch! I like this very much :) jack.