Right Time Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Right Time

Rating: 5.0


With every breath we inhale,
With every breath we exhale,
With every tick of the clock,
Our life span is shortened;
We move second by second
To our confirmed destination,
Our grave.

To perform at least one good deed,
To quit at least one bad habit,
To abandon at least one bad thought,
This very second is the right time.
One by one we can shun
All that is bad in us, before we move
To our grave.

Dhaka
20 November 2021

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Random thoughts that occured to my mind....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 22 November 2021

Another gem of a poem. A poet leaves examples for us all to follow.5*

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 November 2021

There won't be time for performing at the Kingdom of last destination so, need to do good what we want to do

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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2021

I more would follow, These beautiful wise words, We'd have a much better World, Much less cruel and hollow. Beautiful poem, full of the kindness and good feelings that so deeply shine in you and your marvelous poetry. Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2021

Correction First word of comment should say, ' If '.

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SherryGibson 21 November 2021

hallo

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2022

Perfect. A timely composition dear poet...5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

Five Stars and to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

So brilliantly expressed and beautifully presented. Sandra is right, your pen is full of kindness. Kindness that we really need in this time of uncertainty

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

Beautiful, beautiful and thoughtful poem with a great message to humanity. If we abide with the wisdom embedded in this great poem, there will be no war, no killings and no chlidren that are separated from their families or gone too soon.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 November 2021

As realisation dawns our faith strengthens

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