! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rhythm Of Heaven***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rhythm Of Heaven***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
symphony of blue sees rain mingling
gleams of green redounds to joy
is this rendezvous by iridescence?
as silence seems to croon on rune of void
quest bewilders in shadow of darkness
cry still tolls bell ringing on earth
eclipse of sun radiates whole universe
lest resonance may find rhythm of heaven
do we ever mean rust in rungs that cascades?
as colors of dream mill through nightmare
and we call upon quest on verge on shore
light of love when dapples by art of craving
dusts beneath and beyond feels eternity
each precipitates of blue enligtens soul
dew of night still dazzles by distant rays
moments when ruffles by dearth by falling
The ‘rhythm of heaven’ (likened to a symphony) , remains a mystery. And though, by searching, men seek to know, understand and find it out - all the searching is in vain because it is hidden from us. Again, brilliant writing. Thank you.
thank you my dear poetess for your inspiring words of appreciation,
i enjoyed your choice of words used within this poem.......its appealing and visual
I believe that you are saying that we are in that 'rhythm of heaven' as it is universal. That which is simple can be quite complex. Thank you for inviting me to read your work. Your command of language stretches mine.
Dear sir, I hardly understood your poem. It is rich of ancient English literature words. But I think you mean by your words (between the lines) ..: As silence seems to croon on rune of void Eclipse of sun radiates whole universe Sometimes we hopelessly try to hide our feelings We stand like the moon against the sun radiations Not to let the world know the truth our deep strong feelings Our love is like the sun no clouds can hide it neither the moon can do. Still the truth shines the truth of love the truth of life. Even the water drops can not change the salty taste of the ocean. The wide ocean where we are thirsty floating with our dreams and our will Hoping to reach the shore where we wish to find the eternal happiness. Thank you for inviting me to read your poem. It would be very nice of you reading some of my humble poetic essays. And please feel free to comment or to advise the way you like.
oh thanks dear poet for your soul searching analysis, i really admire you the way you analyze poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Rhythm of heaven reflected by rainbow of love is blue ever on green pasture! Nice and colourful poem to read!