! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rain Of Tears ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
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still i do remember those nursery days
asking the postman passing by my home
do I have any letter please in my name?
he turns his face, my heart rejoices
like peacock dancing to clouds of hope.....
if he runs straight ignoring saddened voice of quest
my pain reverberates by his feeble rejoinder of negation
heart knows its resonance by emptiness of soul
redolence seems to fear of lone uncanny utterance
rill reels through blood by deep silence of sun setting
whom should i ask rune of sorrow when reneged
light when slowly settles in rucks of darkness
earth apprehends of falling snow losing warmth
do we ever know beats of riffling heart beneath quest?
as wrinkles engulf portrayal of art by rain of tears
rain of tears pour anytime from past to future rain of tears are always present...
very beautiful poem.... your words gives the strong emotion of the poet regards sandhya
sorry for the delay, only today i became able to comment..beautiful touching poem, loved that images you drew for the post man and you..10+++++
beautifully reminiscent... what else sir.. i just went back to the flourishing days of the letter writing culture.. brilliantly drawn imagery.. kudos to you.. regards: prashant
A beautiful poem of an experience that's indelible in a child's little mind: being disappointed by someone he love or expecting something and not getting it from someone loved. A poem that's well written-as usual. a 10
Wow! You awakend in me a memory. When I was 4 my grandfather sent me a letter. Since I could not quite read yet, he drew the words in pictures. Everyday after that, for quite a while, I would stand under the post box waiting for the mailman. I did not know a letter was rare and needed to be answered. There is a lot to this poem. Thankyou!
your poem moistened my eyes with rain of tears. u r excellent in giving vent to tragic emotions. Carry on brother
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
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touching piece...voices straight from your soul....of missing, longing, yearning for something special from someone special...really a nice write it sends a very unexplainable impact...echoing... wonderful reminiscing...of one's happy moments... wonderful memories... but as time is ephemeral...from happiness to sadness...then to happiness... a circling process in life...and its not yet finish, , , something to look forward too... I love this write...quenching.... As always, you shared with us your piece flowing with great knowledge on thoughts, vocabulary, superb meaning, significance.....making my mind works from stagnancy..(smile) a very wonderful experience for me to read your works and to be one of your fans.. More power to you...more writes... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia