Remember Me Poem by Charles Hancock

Remember Me

Rating: 4.3


On that pleasant spring morning,
when the birds are out and performing
and the sun's rays are warming

Remember me

On that sultry summer night
after the thunderstorm yielded its might
and the moon is revealing a little light

Remember me

On that crisp autumn day
when you have time to whittle away
and the leaves are an intense color buffet

Remember me

On that raw winter twilight
when the sun is inching out of sight
and you're ready to call it a night

Remember me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Damian Leonard 14 December 2012

Great poem mate, nice work!

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Bri Edwards 26 July 2022

I now give it four stars, and several stares as well. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2022

I like it and will 'favor' it. But I wonder if you used 'whittle away' where 'while away' fits better. Hmm. I don't recall hearing of 'whittle away' before today. bri ;)

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 February 2016

On that raw winter twilight when the sun is inching out of sight and you're ready to call it a night Remember me beautiful. wishes, desires intense. Remember me. thank you dear poet. tony

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A lovely poem and it is beautiful....

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Valerie Dohren 14 December 2012

A lovely poem, very poignant.

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