Remember Me. Poem by Laurie hill

Remember Me.

Rating: 5.0


Mists weaving, creeping, past my sight,
Heralding the coming night,
In silence,
Suspended thoughts, in troubled mind,
A memory grasped then left behind,
In darkness,
A distant sound, the weeping girl,
Darker, mists that gently swirl,
Then, the light,
Of the holy sight,
Of heaven and the single saint,
A sight of awe, yet only faint,
The weeping girls last plea,
In love please hear, I beg of thee.
Remember me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T S 08 October 2009

Words are not enough...... This is an awesome work of art..... like a tapestry... each new thread of words blends in with the last.Awesome I am stuck for words.

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Rosalita Fernandez 28 June 2009

Beautiful.............................

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Ruth Walters 28 April 2009

Another movie scene in my head...you're good at this young man! Ruthy

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

Beautiful, just beautiful. Perhaps the best word combination in the English language is 'Remember me.' A poem with that title can't possibly go wrong. It surely doesn't here. The added element of a crying girl. Now that is a priceless thing. Bravo! GW62

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Sunflower Field 19 February 2009

This is beautiful I really thought it was good.

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