Remember Me Poem by Tim Adams

Remember Me

Rating: 4.5


It's been an entire year now
a gift from me to you,
a daily poem saying
how my love is true.
My heart on my sleeve
and I just cannot see,
how you still forget
this gift to you from me.
I try to remember
all that's on your mind,
that your so overwhelmed
by your daily grind.
So much has happened
in this past year,
so much strength gained
but still so much fear.
I sometimes still wonder
if there will ever be,
a time when you
will come live with me.
I try to be patient
with what your going through,
that your doing the best
with what's been dealt to you.
Just know through this storm
that there will always be,
a rock for you to cling to
and that rock will always be me.

Thursday, July 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2016

that there will always be, a rock for you to cling to and that rock will always be me. Beautiful promise in love and for love....... really beautiful. thank you dear poet. tony

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Tim Adams 29 July 2016

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

Life is surely complicated, as are relationships. A powerful and nicely written piece, Tim. I hope all works out for the best

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 July 2016

I sometimes still wonder if there will ever be, a time when you will come live with me. I try to be patient with what your going through, that your doing the best with what's been dealt to you. Beautiful way love. Thanks for the delicacy in the lines.10 for it. Thanks for the sharing. Subhas

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Tim Adams 29 July 2016

I believe love is understanding what each person is going through and to always consider that when times are rough. I have a beautiful soul to share that with. Thank you for commenting.

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