Remember 9/11? Poem by Alf Hutchison

Remember 9/11?

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Can you recall where you were, September nine/eleven?
When all hell did break loose; from Kamikaze heaven,

In disbelief, you watched aghast… another plane, another blast.

Can you recall your disbelief, when Pan Am hit those Towers?
Proud symbols to a decadent world, of capitalistic powers;

Twin phallic symbol monuments… to green backs, dollars, cents.

Can you recall those heinous scenes; gut wrenching, grim and dire?
The New York skyline so unique, engulfed in smoke and fire,

This was no false illusion… Pandora’s Box of mass confusion,

Can you recall saying farewell, to those who died in vain?
Giving thanks to firemen; friends, you’d never see again,

Saluting unsung heroes… with your tears of grief and woes.

Can you recall the Israeli news; so grotesquely vile and sour?
Palestinians singing in the streets; praising ‘Islam’s finest hour’!

Never will we be the same…Jihadist joy, now Islam’s shame.

Can you recall having pondered, before that fateful flight?
A second ‘Viet Nam’ would rage; with not an end in sight

Times have changed now in The West… Jihad won’t let free man rest.

Can you recall when on your knees, praising God through prayer and song,
Protect our nation, even though, in the eyes of God, we have gone wrong,

A Savior stands now in the wings…He is Lord of lords and King of kings.
Choose now America, Hell or Heaven…or have you all forgotten…nine/eleven?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Kreiner Sera 15 May 2009

I remember all to well Alf, coming off the green-laughter around me then a dead silence of complete disbelief...even now a cold shiver runs through me. Powerful write - true facts nothing hidden - like the Big C these atrocities infiltrate silently until the deed is done. Regards Cindy

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Robert Delucchi 15 May 2009

you linked the symbols - the role players - and of course the consequence and expertly show the answer with excellent use of rhyme well done robert

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thank you for writing this... one of my sisters was suppose to be inn the building... but sjhe stayed home.. whew! !

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James Mclain 16 May 2009

I do recall..vividly where it was that i was at...greed cannot be tutored, by any amount of plans..it is a shameful wast, the human beings that say no more in voice unheard again....iip

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Nostradmous said, when the new city is burning WW 3 would start.BUT, since Cain killed Abel it only grew.

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~ Jon London ~ 17 June 2009

I remember it well Alf my friend, I was 3 blocks away in Manhattan...when the news came through that a plane had hit the first tower...I remember, you hear yourself think for the sounds of sirens....It wasn't until they broad-cast the attacks on the news..did the full horror of what happened on the 11th...sink in..........it was devestating...the loss of life was unthinkable.....and still today, , people as the same thing......HOW? .........There's alot more to that day, that will become exposed over time......Thank you Alf for this remembrance piece to those who lost their lives, and to those who's loved ones died in the senseless acts of 9/11....may god seek justice for his children.....someone has to answer to it

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Mandy Hutchison 12 June 2009

Incredible Dad, Wow! ! ! ! ! !

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Nangula Immanuel 02 June 2009

Wow! now this is an etremely good piece. I love how you put end rhymes and then an internal one in every so often. I especially like last couplet.! ! ! great one! Brilliant work.

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Seema Chowdhury 20 May 2009

excellent and powerful poem. thanks for the reminder.

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This is such powerful writing. Asking questions as you have floods the memories back to me so strongly. It was all surreal and tragic. Excellent poetry Alf. 10 Karin Anderson

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