Remember Poem by kaitreena stwert

Remember

Rating: 5.0


Remember when we were so in love?
I do, because you were the one I could trust.

Remember when you would hold me tight?
I do, I didn't want you to let go, I wanted it to last all night.

Remember when we use to argue about the stupidest things?
I do, because when you got mad it was the cutest thing!

Remember when our love was so strong?
I do, because I thought nothing could go wrong.

Remember when you said you loved me?
I do, I had a great feeling come to me.

Remember when you said you wouldn't lie?
I do, because when I found out, all I did was cry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 14 October 2011

Dear poet, It is simple yet a lucid poem. Words are humble but you conveyed your feeling royally. I think this poem walked straight away from your heart. I like the originality of this lovely poem. I am moved when read your love poem. Anyways, A fatabulous poem... hats off to the poetess! ..............

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Feeling of remembrance of a good love... Yet sad end, ... you penned it so nicely... Nice poem

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 30 September 2011

I'll Remember this...

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 30 September 2011

A sad yet beautiful write coming straight from the heart.. Very nicely weaved...Excellent.

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