Vaibhav Pandey

Rookie - 5 Points (23 march,1987 / new delhi)

*religious Fission... - Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Earth evolved, with it the seeds of mankind.
Uncivilised, uncouth yet with fair mind.
Knew they not, the art of differentiation.
A proclivity to progress; their perennial profession.
But with time, their mind needed a healer,
To detoxify their core from the worldly pleasure.

So few came up with a set of spiritual offers,
To build a new world of eclesiastic orders.
Some found peace and others a reason,
To segregate themselves from the bond of unison.
In the name of god, they started a religious fission,
And the essence of oneness vanished with seasons....


Comments about *religious Fission... by Vaibhav Pandey

  • (1/25/2010 12:22:00 PM)


    Indeed fellow Earthling- your profundity is Humanly well expressed
    I totally agree with the related contemporary WMD 'Fission' of;
    War, religion and political controversies
    You write;
    'In the name of god, they started a religious fission,
    And the essence of oneness vanished with seasons.... '

    god is not he
    god is not she
    God is We
    - Buddhism

    Thank you for your Wisdom sharing.
    ...louie
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  • (7/1/2009 4:34:00 AM)


    nice effort...well woven...quite impressive... (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2009 11:31:00 PM)


    you ve used very effective words indeed which can speak to the core of the reader's mind....thanks for the words of wisdom10++ (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/8/2009 5:15:00 AM)


    In atomic explosion fission and fusion both are chain process, one related to the other. So is the religious fission and fusion. But your poem is true in spirit and sense......10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2009 10:59:00 PM)


    I liked the title of this poem, it is very apt! More blood has been lost in this world due to religious fission - than all the World Wars put together! When core of the atom is split lot of evil and negative energy is released! We require' fusion'!
    Like in music we have excellent jazz fusion! GOD IS ONE, - let us all blend
    together for the cause of Humanity! I have written on these aspects already!
    Thanks! 10!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • (4/30/2009 8:19:00 AM)


    and with with fission
    came a lot of hate with passion
    to trade and barter
    our souls to the devil

    come lets forget this fission
    and live as brothers and sisters in love
    then this early mission
    will surely become a true vision
    as the Lord God above
    had truly intended
    wonderful write vaibhav
    -10 anjali
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  • Maia Padua (4/30/2009 6:41:00 AM)


    great thoughts evolve here..
    you shared with us a great piece..
    very wholesome...
    touches one's inner thoughts...
    ...thought's provoking write..
    10++++
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  • Meggie Gultiano (4/28/2009 12:32:00 AM)


    thought provoking...but anice job you have here, son

    Hugs,
    Mom
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  • Akram Saqib (4/27/2009 1:28:00 PM)


    GREAT COINCIDENCE COINED BETWEEN ATOMIC AND RELIGIOUS FISSION (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2009 10:42:00 AM)


    a fusion of powerful profound thoughts..churned out from your sensitive mind
    thought provoking!
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  • (4/23/2009 10:35:00 PM)


    Perceptave and relevent in todays chaotic evolution of spiritual and social changes. (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (4/23/2009 6:04:00 PM)


    religious unity is in everyone, because their is only one GOD, no matter what name we may give him. (Report) Reply

  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (4/23/2009 9:43:00 AM)


    Yeah how true........we are seperated so much with fanatic faiths leading to chaos...beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2009 2:03:00 AM)


    Not withstanding the fission, I do see a fusion among the real seekers of God! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2009 4:24:00 PM)


    Vaibhav,
    Very philosophical and theological and proufound. A wonderful insight for one so young. My utmost compliments.
    Ms Susan
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/22/2009 3:06:00 PM)


    yet world would vanish again by another big bang! ! ! ! , really humanistic idea, well penned,10+, thanks forsharing (Report) Reply

  • Rajkumar Mukherjee (4/22/2009 5:05:00 AM)


    Dear Vaibhav,
    It's a really thought provoking poem coming from a very young man. The religion whose main object was perhaps to unify people and keep them bonded together in peace has lost it's object in the hands of the preachers.. So, last four lines of your poem says it all. beautiful idea, relevant for the day, nice rhyme selective minimal words -all calls for A-10- for you Vaibhav.-Rajkumar
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (4/22/2009 2:21:00 AM)


    Amazing flow and subject.10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2009 3:38:00 PM)


    Peace is so precious
    such a lovely piece indeed
    and thank you for the love in your heart
    you spread so lovingly
    10++
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  • (4/21/2009 5:20:00 AM)


    very true indeed.....
    wonderful poem, friend.
    the last two lines take the poem to a different level.....
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 20, 2009


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