Finally........At Peace Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Finally........At Peace

Rating: 4.1


buried.............I am,
under the grave of expectation.
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waiting...........I am,
to butcher the ghost of obligation.
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unleashing......I am,
from the shackles of dogmatisation.
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progressing.....I am,
to the path of liberation.
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living.............I am,
now,
finally at peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 22 December 2008

The style is good...concept wonderful. I liked it so much.

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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

Short, small, yet so powerful, meaningful, and thought provoking.

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Surya . 23 December 2008

Hi Nice poem.Strong feelings.congrats 9/10. Surya surya

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Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

words with strong feelings..........short n much powerful......thanks for sharing........sebastine

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Ency Bearis 24 December 2008

nice verses..contemplation well expressed in achieving peace..

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Vaibhav, Peace is one state that many seek and never find it's sad they can't see that when freed from the artificial constructs of man, then one is at peace. I guess people get too caught up in the ways of the world. Very introspective and contemplating. A real thinker for sure. Thanks for sharing.10+

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Ritty Patnaik 30 July 2009

finally you got peace, the only aim of human existence.extremely well written.poem, focused in the right direction! god bless you. ritty

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 18 March 2009

wow.....this is a very calm and peaceful poem........ sincerely expressed. thank you very much.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 January 2009

There is no doubt about the quality of this poem. I loved the poem and the structure. This is a great poem. Bravo! GW62

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 January 2009

Finally........ a simple wise poem has come out of muddly words.... Good job Vaibhav!

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