Refusing To Be Just Another Girlfriend Poem by Old Teenage Poems

Refusing To Be Just Another Girlfriend

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If I am only a temperary substitute
in the darkest shadows of your desire
Then why does your every touch
Place me so much higher

If I am someone who's presence
you will never miss
Why do you tell me you need me
within every kiss

If I am but a wish of yours,
a childish dream within
Then why are you such a saint
and I'm you only sin

If you think I am
Only what meets the eye
Then of what use
Would you other senses be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Lynch 16 August 2007

A strong title, I urge you to stick to it. An amazing poem. No one should be a substitute, It's an insult to our devotion. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Amanda Saveley 30 July 2007

I often wonder that myself. It is similar to...if we aren't going to think, what good will it do us to speak? Can't have one without the other, and this instance is no different. Fantastic job.

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