Redness Poem by Suhail Kakorvi

Redness

Rating: 5.0


Oh!
I intend to bring in those eyes
brightness of love
And with that predicting something
tears my dress of sanity
That moment tremor of winds of emotion
turns into cyclone
Then when I make the tender heart of beloved restless
Deep as pacific ocean those lovely eyes
I adopt the style of sinking therein
There are red lines in them
are they red alert to desirous heart
what redness signifies?
Riddle got solution
My intention blessed with success

Sunday, March 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 31 March 2015

The emotions run riot when the eyes carry on the dialogue between the lover and his muse who is won over in the end. Entire sequence comes alive before the eyes of the reader. Wonderful poem. Thanks, Suhail Kakorvi Sahab.

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