Redemption Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Redemption

Rating: 5.0


Redemption
(the book you were reading, afterward,
I ask if I may keep that book, a poem for Marie in the USA)

You were like a mother to me
you made me mature and you set me free

This is not a poem
but dear words to congratulate thee
Today you shall be celebrating
your Birthday is on the 8 of the 8

The book Redemption is kept on my bookshelf carefully
you paid The Netherlands a visit and brought this with you

I asked you whether I may keep that book

I still cherish that book in my nook

thank you so much, dear Marietje

Redemption
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marietje Neyland 24 August 2022

O, ja nog de 5 Stars voor jou

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 August 2022

Deeply thankful and most appreciated your visit to my poem site

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Marietje Neyland 24 August 2022

Mooi gedicht, lieve Sylvie. Goed dat je me een tip hebt gegeven om dit te lezen. Dankjewel. God's Zegen, ook groetjes van George.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 August 2022

Thank you so much dear Marietje, Much appreciated you have taken time to read this Birthdaytribute for you.. Thank you! Greetings to George.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 August 2022

Typo: somewhere

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 August 2022

The poetess has expressed some whaer that it's not a poem but I call it an excellent poem. In modern poetry, whatever you express in brief manner can be included into the category of free verse. Liked this poem so much dear poetess. Top score!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 August 2022

Excellently worded your great support, dear Poet, Thank you so much for your Top score.

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