Recording The Reality Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Recording The Reality

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If Reality only exists by observing it: —
Do your memories are matching mine?

When our hearts, and our minds,
Were such precisely synchronised!

Tuning into the same frequency…
When I used to observe you,

While you were looking away, —
Did your peripheral vision
Recorded those moments?

And your mind ignored the front view:
Never recorded—never existing?

Or, perhaps, existing only for other observers;
Becoming their own reality—a different Reality,
Taking place at the same time.

For Reality is—to be present with your whole being.

Wednesday, January 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,perception,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

You have invited our attention to the true core of reality that can be felt when our hearts and minds are in precise synchronization……..The last line is the essence of the poem that you want to articulate! A very insightful piece of poetry!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 January 2018

Mihaela, such a brilliant write👍👍👍

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M Asim Nehal 03 January 2018

Lovely perception of the reality and fakeness, I enjoyed your poem after long gap...............

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