Ravi Kay Sahil Pe Main Aur Bus Too Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Ravi Kay Sahil Pe Main Aur Bus Too

Rating: 5.0


Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too,
wuh sondhi sondhi si mtti ki boo,
hathon mein hathon ki narmi bhi thi,
sanson mein sanson ki garmi bhi thi,
lahron mein ek aks tha hoo bahoo,
Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too,
aankhon mein aankhon ki masti bhi thi,
darya pe chandi barasti bhi thi,
sannata tanhai ka char soo,
Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too,
shamon pe zulfon ka saya bhi tha,
raton pe gulrang aaya bhi tha,
fitrat ki devi bhi thi roo baroo,
Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too,
honton pe honton ki thi dastan,
door dharti pe jhukta hua aasman,
thandi thandi hawaon ki mdira madhoo,
Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too.

Ravi Kay Sahil Pe Main Aur Bus Too
Sunday, December 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: evening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2015

Very beautiful presentation about evening we see in imagery with thoughtful composition. A tender touch of evening open door of emotion. Wisely penned poem shared definitely.10

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2015

Is nazm me aapne dharti, aaksh, hawa, Ravi ke kinaare pasra sannata aur mitti ki sugandh ke sath sath muhabbat ki ik madhur daastaan badi khoobsurti se piroyi hai. Bahut khoob. Shukriya. thandi thandi hawaon ki mdira madhoo, Ravi kay sahil pe main aur bus too.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

bahut hi sundar gajal 10+++ awesome.........................

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Mithilesh Yadav 14 February 2016

bhaut hi khubsoorat si nazm hain....... bhaut pyari...... grrtt sirji

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Shahzia Batool 22 January 2016

A light and lyrical composition...nice to see Urdu poetry so encouraged too... thanks for sharing...

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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2015

Padhte hue rang chaya sa tha Ravi ka paani samaya sa tha Ankhon mein dekh unki mastiyaan ek khumar chaya sa tha.............................Ek behtareen Nazm Janab Akhtar Jawad Saheb ki, Maza Aa gaya.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 December 2015

Ek khoobsoorat aur lajawab nazm..........................

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