Ravenous Hunger Poem by Brad Kellum

Ravenous Hunger

Rating: 5.0


The snake travels up the spine.
Coiling.
Twisting.
Contorting.
HUNGRY!
Looking for that sweet spot.
Unyeilding pain.
Wanting to enter the cortex.
Craving the complete system.
Striving for that place that will leave me lain.
Devising faceless replace.
Snake of Eden paid,
upon my for thine sins.
Horrid fire paid for my deeds.
Groveling to the knees of a demon that pays no heed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Truthful Light Treeclimber 27 December 2008

intense.. made me massage my back

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Patrick McFarland 20 December 2008

Mesmerizing poem Brad. Echoes of Jim Morrison in this one. A 10 from me.

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