Rains 1: A False Step Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Rains 1: A False Step

Rating: 5.0


Lo, time to rain's here,
Love lingers in air,
Roads, mood's slippery; take care.
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Two days of heavy rain here, flood waters all around, power off, can't stir out; only but watching water below and rain clouds above. And the result was these ditties on rain, one to six.
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Haiku |03.08.2019|

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It gets slippery in rain and one has to take a careful step. Walk carefully not to slip. And one can also slip in love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 August 2019

Such a sweet poem yet a deep one to ponder. Rain is nice, but a slip can make you fall both physically and emotionally. A fine poem on Rain.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 August 2019

Thanks Dr GRM

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 August 2019

Wow! A brilliant Haiku sir.............appreciated the concept and the poem as well..........................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 August 2019

Many thanks for liking the Haiku, appreciation and rating.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

Time to rain is here And love is in air. It's all slippery, take care......touching expression with wonderful imagination. Lofty theme. Marvelous poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Word-puns are used in poems, we know, but when the sense derived makes a pun it is more interesting, thanks you so much dear poet reader KM.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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