Sunrise drum windows
dancing thru crystal chimes
few million rainbows
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 4Oct2015 All Rights Reserved
Wow..That's the wonderful Haiku with few million rainbows. I just wonder. Loved it.
Sometimes through prisms of a glass windows, sometimes through bubbles of the surfing soap, someone in a dress of seven colors, semi transparent, she descends from skies, snd dances like Manika before my sight, I try to become Vishwamitra for her, but whenever I tried to capture her, she starts playing hide and seek, disappears, re-appears, untill my wife knocks at the doors, You are taking too much time in a bath, now please come out and spare it for me. And when I reply, you mean Manika? She exclaims, Who is Manika! Your lovely poem inspired to write these lines as my comment.
Thank you Akhtarji, happy my short haiku has elicited such a sweet poem and the ethereal Manika.. thank you for your kind comment.
so i finally looked for magik in Google and found: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ma·gick noun noun: magick chiefly archaic spelling of magic. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - so maybe that was on your mind? bri :) p.s. i now see your response below. i don't know if such responses come to me as a message; i hadn't read it until now. :)
i counted a 1,000,001. is there magic in spelling it magik? ? hee-hee. bri ;) :)
Yes absolutely. A teeny lil tweak to the regular and ordinary creates magik! ! Let the counting go..enjoy the magik! ! Thank you Bri.
Practise with the haiku form, Seema. It will exercise your powers of imagery and economy of expression. Best wishes Charl
Thank you Sir, will continue working on haiku and improve my understanding and grasp on this unique form of expression. Looking forward to more visits and comments from you for my other poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amazing imagery is drawn here. Really wonderful sunrise drums the window. Interesting sharing....10
Thank you Kumarmaniji, my imagination is going at overdrive these days..