Rainbow Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Rainbow

Rating: 4.8


Seven colors of rainbow
Looks like a embow
Embow without a vow
But hearts says wow
By seeing colorful bow

Bow forms after rain
Rain hear means pain
Pain means a gain
Gain should not vain
Vain in colors of fain

Fain is good
But not food
To cross wood
It spills blood
Like a flood

Floods if you rest
In its colorful nest
Its a killing pest
So live your best
To clear its test

Its test of control
So make a enrol
Like tank full petrol
Build a firing role
To make life console

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 March 2009

dear........... poem is good...............but add images........poem is not about rhyming alone......still i give 10+++.................for nice rhymes.....

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Catrina Heart 23 March 2009

great chains of end rhymes...........10

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Joseph Poewhit 23 March 2009

Sort of a sing song play on words - Though the rainbow is GODS covenant with us that he will not flood the world again. [ good vibe ]

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I do liek the rhymes and poem.. good going.

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Janell Cressman 28 March 2009

wonderfly writen! ! ! ! ! ! ! i tryed to write a poem like that where every line starts with the last word of the last line, there hard so good for you

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Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Very inventive format, Kranthi.......................................

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Carl Harris 24 March 2009

It is quite possible, Kranthi, that this is the one thousandth poem I have read about a rainbow. The number could be even higher, for I know I have read over 50,000 poems so far in my lifetime. This one, however, is one of the more unique of such poems. It is quite exressive and gets it point across very well. Carl.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 March 2009

Nice rhyme after rhyme from rainbow to make life console.

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Eyan Desir 23 March 2009

I felt it rhyme so much it took out the meanin of your poem...But good rhymin

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