Rain Soaked Sun Porch Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Rain Soaked Sun Porch

Rating: 4.5


Clouds are crawling like ghosts
Over the grassland,
Leaving moist message of mourning
Upon the tip of green.
The sky is not unlighted yet,
Shimmering with a pale whiteness
Like the sclera of your eyes.
Then a sudden gust of rain drenches
Our nostalgia for the sun,
That you’ve hoisted as yellow flags
At our open porch of afternoon-love.

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lovers,nature,rainy season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Clouds are crawling like ghosts...Over the grassland, in this amazing imagery and this is definitely very interesting sharing.....10

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Shakil Ahmed 09 November 2015

beautiful comparisons, nice images, well penned, thanks for sharing,

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Loke Kok Yee 09 November 2015

what a beautiful sunrise thanks

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M Asim Nehal 09 November 2015

Great imagery.........and awesome lines...Loved it.

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