Rain Poem by Adela Myers

Rain

Rating: 5.0


Sweet aroma of rain
Breeze so fresh and cool
Tear drops of pain
Hit the endless ground of pool

A sky of eternal grey
Surrounded by unforgetful cries
Don't stop; I pray 
For on the concrete it lies

Falling ever so lightly 
Clouds depart
A moon shines brightly
Crying; now my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yoseph Lupu 05 June 2012

Nice and touching! Few words with much meaning.

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Ramesh Rai 05 June 2012

Certainly I like to vote this poem. bcoz just now it started raining after hottest sun and I can realise the clarity of your poem

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Jasmine Smith 28 May 2012

This is a really good poem. Your very good at what you do.

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