Rain Poem by Shay Chesney

Rain

Rating: 3.5


The laughter dies away,
Leaving me alone,
Looking for one person,
that person is my dad.

He left while I was young,
didnt give a thought
But now my mom is gone
my family torn apart.

He took drugs
did alcohole
didnt have
a care at all.

So if you find my dad,
tell him that i'm searching,
For the man that i called dad
with more hope that i've ever had.

The rain is falling down
wishing it would take me too,
I need my family more than ever
and now I need rain too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 13 August 2009

I love the rain, and is one of my favorite things. I love the way it looks, its sorrow in each drop The puddles the design in the puddles the feeling on your skin Such a deep intent poem but lovely as well keep it up

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Obinna Eruchie 16 June 2009

Sad, but touching to read.

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Rochelle Bell 15 June 2009

ohhh shay thatz beautiful/sad! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 12 June 2009

''tell him that i'm searching, For the man that i called dad with more hope that i've ever had'' lovely to read...

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