Rain Poem by Juneil Sechico

Rain

Rating: 5.0


Nourishes the flowers, makes them grow,
Showers the dried river, makes it flow,
Keeping a tree taking a grip to its ground,
Teaches the frogs how to make an awaking sound.

Blesses the grains of the farm,
Cleans the body of a filthy vagabond,
Rejuvenates the aged tree;
Dusts of foliage washed away.

Every dropp is counted with its purpose,
Good or bad depends how you take a stand with your shoes,
Brings you wellness when you think positive,
Illness when you just flood and weep.

Take it with joy though it has a bunch of pain,
It's teaching you how to enjoy the sun when it'll shine again,
As it has been said; '' Think not of its gloom,
But the nourishing showers that makes the flowers bloom.''

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 04 September 2008

I love the expression 'showers the dried river, makes it flow' A oiece straight from the heart, and the honesty of description shines through/ Well Done. from Fay.

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Deborah Cromer 28 July 2009

Very beautiful. Rain and nature is true beauty. You wrote this in a natural way and it reads very well. DC

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Sheilla San Diego 01 May 2009

really good! I like this poem as well.

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Inner Whispers 31 January 2009

nice expression on how rain come over...make it rain, Juneil! 10

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Lynda Robson 22 January 2009

A nice uplifting poem, full of imagery and shows the wonder of nature 10 Lynda xxx

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Manonton Dalan 25 September 2008

i'm impress with your positive outlook. go at it. good luck. beautiful poem i love nature myself.md

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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