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rain

rain
rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
rain, rain, rain there will be rain here, there will be rain there
rain, rain, rain wash away my pain
rain, rain, rain wash away my debts to pay
rain, rain, rain so tired i felt wash away my guilt
rain, rain i will do anything for you to cover my tears of shame

Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2008
Edited: Sunday, June 15, 2008

Comments about this poem (rain by shameka jones )

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  • Lilly Rose (3/3/2010 3:20:00 PM)

    Love it Think you hit a spot there

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  • Leah Farmer (8/25/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! !

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  • Kareema Muhammad (7/31/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    hay i really luve ur poem :)

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  • Your Mama (6/9/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    suckish

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  • Bussaba Kulkittiyanon (1/30/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven.

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  • Kalan Rider (7/25/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    it reminds me of god

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  • Ryan Thompson (7/24/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    i hope rain washes it all way,

    i like how you show that you can be healed and what not O.o

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (6/15/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry.
    I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough
    to be a worthwhile read.

    GW62

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  • Kashumaru Mizume (6/15/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job.

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