shameka jones

Rain - Poem by shameka jones

rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
rain, rain, rain there will be rain here, there will be rain there
rain, rain, rain wash away my pain
rain, rain, rain wash away my debts to pay
rain, rain, rain so tired i felt wash away my guilt
rain, rain i will do anything for you to cover my tears of shame

Comments about Rain by shameka jones

  • Gold Star - 14,838 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/30/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    simple wording, yet rhythmic and appealing. Kind I love. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Gold Star - 36,330 Points * Sunprincess * (7/11/2014 10:59:00 PM)

    .........very nicely written....the rain can do all this.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vanessa Smith (8/15/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    Wow....just, wow............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lilly Rose (3/3/2010 3:20:00 PM)

    Love it Think you hit a spot there (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leah Farmer (8/25/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kareema Muhammad (7/31/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    hay i really luve ur poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Mama (6/9/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    suckish (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bussaba Kulkittiyanon (1/30/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kalan Rider (7/25/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    it reminds me of god (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ryan Thompson (7/24/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    i hope rain washes it all way,

    i like how you show that you can be healed and what not O.o (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/15/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry.
    I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough
    to be a worthwhile read.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashumaru Mizume (6/15/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 15, 2008

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