Quick Fix Poem by Portia Lane

Quick Fix

Rating: 4.5


Longtime no talk
Longer time no see
Got me goin crazy over here
See what you doin to me
Hair fallin out
Can’t concentrate
Don’t wanna be with anyone else
Canceling all my dates
Face constantly in a pillow
Don’t want the world to hear my screams
Friends mad at me
Sayin recently I’ve been mean
I can’t say they’re wrong
But don’t wanna say they’re right
Feeling’s in my heart
Tears I gotta fight
I just need a quick fix
So call me asap

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tatiana Guerrier 24 December 2009

AMAZING! it's like your another me lol. I experienced it all, and changements occured drastically.i give you an applause = ]

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David B 17 November 2009

your hair is falling out, oh no... we need to get you a wing.

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Allan O 06 November 2009

interesting writting...very intense and yet slightly emotional...thanks Portia ~^..^

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