Quality Of Life Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Quality Of Life

Rating: 3.9


I’m a young peacock
With heart full of talk
That’s ready to unlock
Like a flying hawk
But time made it lock

Life showed lot of balk
Since I started to walk
It made me like a rock
Unmoved by any shock
With smiles in stock

Time ticked like clock
With bites of roadblock
But never took sidewalk
Went on and on to stalk
Even in my sleepwalk

History is my wedlock
Even in my moonwalk
Showed me lot of mock
But for me its cakewalk
It made me look like gawk

Many of them in my flock
Make fun of me with yok
I never gave them knock
Instead smiled like Sherlock
On quality of lives outtalk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 17 July 2009

nice simile: ''Time ticked like clock With bites of roadblock'' of this wonderful realistic poem..10

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Joseph Poewhit 17 July 2009

Got to follow that path in life.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 July 2009

A comic-like display of quality of life. The rhyming sounded me really amusing while reading the poem.

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Saadat Tahir 17 July 2009

ya its kinda fun to read....light and easy...with a well managed rhyme well done cheers

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 17 July 2009

A beautiful poem in rhymes...............

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Antonio Liao 23 July 2009

You’ve made my life dream off.....a poem of masterpiece of history of life in the making.... i couldn't imagine the imagery of the poem...wonderful art of words....God bless you...10 +++

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rago rago 20 July 2009

made me sit and read....... thank you for your kind sharing...

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Ted M 19 July 2009

Very Interesting, comparing life to that of a beautiful Peacock;

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Eyan Desir 18 July 2009

Interesting and a nice read...........

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Surya . 18 July 2009

nice theme. beautiful poem.beautiful rhyming too. voted10 surya

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