Promised To Be Kept To Keep Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Promised To Be Kept To Keep

Rating: 5.0


Secrets...
That are kept,
Are secrets...
That may be wept.
To leave one with nights,
Unslept without rest.
Although promised to be kept to keep.

And secrets...
Left,
In a protectiveness...
Never regretted to forget,
Are kept secrets...
Wept.
One wishes to have ever met.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 June 2011

Great poem. Nice sentiments. Skilfully conceived. Rich in imagery. I liked it. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2 if you wish.

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