Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

Live Scores

Click here to see the rest of the list

(boomer / Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide)

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

Promise and the Outlaw

Promise preceded the law,
Watched over the rise of law,
Replaced the law.

Not that it's still not the case
That if you don't misbehave
You'll still be following the law,
But the law was never what was all.

Promise is saviour
Releases us from misbehaviour
Which we cannot release at all.

We live under law.
Proof of the existence of promise,
Will be the existence of life without law.

Submitted: Wednesday, April 10, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

just trying to get a toehold in Galatians 2&3

Comments about this poem (2014 Poet Wishes by douglas scotney )

Enter the verification code :

There is no comment submitted by members..
[Hata Bildir]