Promise Poem by Tin Can

Promise

Rating: 5.0


Promise

I was afraid you'd go, yet you stayed.
Who could ask for more...? Yet, I prayed...,
For the good times we shared, of which I craved.
Remembering the promise you made.

You struck me hard, it hurt. I cried out,
Screaming aloud yet standing proud, I came about.
Lunging at you following through, leaving no doubt,
To you, the promise I made.

Locked away cold and alone, feel like crying.
Punched kicked, these inmates never quit, feel like dying.
I call to you in my hour of need, I take up praying.
Remembering the promise He made.

Like a child humbled before thee, divination has stayed,
In my new life I stand up and praise thee, others I've swayed,
Into believing your word the power of prayer, souls you've saved.
Testament to the promise God made.

Sunday, October 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I felt the poem tells a story. I feel the poem is able to touch individuals triggering them to recant a story all of their own.
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Tin Can

Tin Can

Trowbridge Wiltshire UK
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