Perfect Poem by Tin Can

Perfect

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Perfect isn't easy,
That much is true.
But a perfect love,
I've found in you.
A love that's unspoilt,
Wholesome, and complete.
The kind of love,
I never thought, I'd meet.

Perfect isn't easy.
I cannot deny.
I made you weep,
When caught in a lie.
Purely selfish of me,
What I put you through.
Never thought for one second,
That's what I would do.

Perfect isn't easy.
We can only try.
Try, not only the girl.
But also the guy.
So, don't let others,
Come between us two.
And our perfect love,
Will surely shine through.

Perfect isn't easy.
Try hard as we might.
For troubles come up,
Making us fuss and fight.
But what goes wrong,
Can be put right,
So long as we have,
That perfect love in sight.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love is a contradiction. How soon we spoil anything wholesome.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 02 October 2015

There may not be a perfect love but your poem is about as perfect as it can get.

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Tin Can

Tin Can

Trowbridge Wiltshire UK
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