Pretty Girl Poem by Shir Haberman

Pretty Girl



Naked arms clothed
in thin, white scars
she's left-handed

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Bri Edwards 27 September 2013

it sounds like twins? ? ? My morning call, You shout to me, Pick me up, Play with me......at first i thought my and pick ME up referred to the same person, the baby(ies) . now i think my is the mum. i also first thought near misses were kisses which missed the mark. now i am thinking accidents/almost-accidents. thanks for sharing. i rate it good. maybe it's is better. :) have fun.

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