Pressure And Bumps Poem by Sharron Stephenson

Pressure And Bumps

Rating: 5.0


a burst of pluse,
a beating heart,
the open mind,
the soul aflame,

the race to the top,
the stress,
the expectations on the shoulders,
of the person,
you love,

the fall from grace,
the hard bump,
to the ground,
can be from and cause,
a mental illness,
so do not think,
that it will not happen,
to me,

because it can,
it can happen,
to anyone,
at anytime,
or place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 29 August 2011

blood pressure and goosebumps....good write and combi with love..

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Shadow Girl 28 August 2011

Fantastically written Sharron, great meaning. SG xo

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Eric Cockrell 23 August 2011

can identify with this one a lot... well written!

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Craig Anderson 19 August 2011

Love and friendship but particulaly love are the most strongest emotions we have. It can make a man walk a 1000 miles or to drive a woman to do anything for her man. Yes! Loce can break hearts and minds people tent to forget that part. But love can be the best cure too. Regards. Craig.

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Craig Anderson 19 August 2011

Love and friendship but particulaly love are the most strongest emotions we have. It can make a man walk a 1000 miles or to drive a woman to do anything for her man. Yes! Loce can break hearts and minds people tent to forget that part. But love can be the best cure too. Regards. Craig.

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