Prehistoric Love Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Prehistoric Love

Rating: 5.0


We’re the boat people
Who ply
Near the coast

Where is the safe place
To relieve
Our pains most

This is the boat
Where we should live
Forever

The last destination
Prehistoric love
Ever

2010/2/7

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 February 2010

Spare, elegant lines more than deserving of tens. Encore! Always your friend, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 08 February 2010

' We’re the boat people Who ply Near the coast...' ...................................... These lines have fine implied senses Very lovely version of Nightingale..10 for this... Best wishes, Tsira Tsira

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