Dave Alan Walker

Freshman - 2,441 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Predator


A man with a borrowed soul
hiding the devil behind his eyes
he sits waiting with a fake smile

He coverts what he knows
he's a creature of habit
don't be fooled by his eyes
and fake smiles

Submitted: Tuesday, August 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,668 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/16/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    Nice warning to prey. Beware of fake gestures. Thank you for a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,465 Points Lyn Paul (8/14/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Words that are a little haunting. We know these predators are out there but do forget. Thank you for reminding us in a very clever way. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 5:50:00 AM)

    Wow..wonderful write.. Well said....We cannot change anyone but we ourselves can change....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/13/2013 2:08:00 PM)

    there are many people such as this i n this world, beware. good poem Dave (Report) Reply

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