(((Precious Time-2))) Tanka Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(((Precious Time-2))) Tanka

Rating: 2.9


Love is timeless gem
Like a sparkling diamond
Which is priceless in value
An ageless vow till the end
The kind of marriage to be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 16 January 2009

a nice write, friendship. hit on the spot.

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Fay Slimm 08 January 2009

I love your first opening line Marvin - - and it is so true we cannot know the real value of Love which is timeless and is part of the permanent - - but your short sweet Tanka here goes a long way to helping us see love a little more...... thank you........ hugs and love from Fay....xx

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C T Heart 05 January 2009

Spot on marvin you have said it very well, beautiful simile used and nice theme.10

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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