Pot Of Gold Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Pot Of Gold

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tell you what's gold
to the poet - it is when
he is walking in
the bamboo groove
and all of a sudden
the swivelling leaves
become friends, lipsing
welcome, their hands
doing a Thai dance
the sharp tipped fingers
in rows, waving, all over

tell you when the poet
has struck gold -
it is when the sea rushes
to shore, one luminous line
toppling over the other
metaphorising the the sun
and sky in dazzling ink
- that unreachable they are
they could be brought down
to swim and play with us
teal blanket and fiery shimmering ball
- tangoing, waltzing, galloping,
circling and and heaving in estacy

tell you when the poet
has found his pot of gold -
it is when his words find
their ways into everybody's heart
in such a pleasant flow -
crystal clear vantage wine -
the reader thinks he is writing
a part of each of them
and his brain cant help
sipping each word up
to revitalise itself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 22 September 2006

The magic of the poetic moment eloquently expressed. Music is the breath of life to poetry. Write on, John. Sandra

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Tranquil Ocean 22 September 2006

John...You have reached my heart... Beautiful poem. TO

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Tailor Bell 22 September 2006

profound and moving piece, John. nice read. -Tailor

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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